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» Poem: i kept walking.. as it was just a dream
i kept walking.. as it was just a dream
written by sallyjackpumpkin
03:06 AM 3/13/05
I was going.. leaning towards you
When i told you i love you
That's when you pushed me aside and left me behind
All night long i cryed, and oh how i cryed
I cryed for you, I cryed for the best
Hoping something come across and last
I came back to you the next day
I'll describe to you how he described me
Your eyes are so red. what has happen to you?
Are you sick or are you in pain?
Why your pants are jagged up. i guess you didn't know what to wear or is this a crazy dare?
Your shirt braley fits you and your hair and you are a complete mess
I started to cry right in front of him
I fell on top of him
This is the story i told him
"I love you, i dont know why, i cryed last night for you
I'm not exactly sure why. I'm a mess b/c of you. I know you don't have the same feelings as me.. hunnie. But please stay my friend and don't leave me."
That's when i walked away and he grabbed my arm and said to me that he was in love with me so very much.
We laughed and both thought we were going crazy
And now we are so very close.. and i'm happy once more.
But then that's when i realized the last part about him loving me was me just day dreaming as a i kept walking....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is just how i feel about my ex b/f still and how i wish he would do to me. and i couldnt think of a title so dont mind me

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by (guest) (3-13-2005 - 04:07 AM)
ur good. i realate to this it almost made me cry.

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