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» Poem: Lonely Eyes.
Lonely Eyes.
written by Josh_x
03:27 AM 3/13/05
He's so alone
All he could do was cry
He was too scared to take his life
He didn't want to hurt anyone
More than he hurt himself
The pain was only for him
Noone else
Mother i'm sorry
For failing you
Father i'm sorry
For not letting you take my life
Brother i'm sorry
That i was born instead of you
I never felt so alone
Hate is my only company
You were better company
Until you walked away
Muttering cruel words of hate
There was no longer a sparkle in your eyes
As you looked into mine
Hidden by tears
Tears for me
Tears for you
Tears for us
Falling to the ground
Screaming your name
But it was just too late
So that's why i'm here
With this sharp pretty knife
Just about ready to take my life.


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» Comments / Feedback
by countrybrat72 (3-13-2005 - 03:28 AM)
wow...that was beautiful

by ForeverUnseen (3-13-2005 - 03:31 AM)
deeply awesome

by hotchick727 (3-13-2005 - 04:17 AM)
that was amazing! i love all of your poems! they seem really deep and i dunno....... i can really relate to most of them.-christie

by fairyleena (3-13-2005 - 04:22 AM)
very deep thoughts. Its awsome.

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