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silent death
written by morbidhands89805:56 AM 3/13/05my answer so deep. Just like my cuts.
My thoughts so alone. It feels like I must.
No one around me. No one to embrace.
I'm wrapped around death like a twirling of lace.
Here laying down near a bed drenched with blood.
A color so deep like a mixure of mud.
I grab once again, the "tool" that has torn my flesh.
Wishing time would rewind. Wishing time would refresh.
Here comes the silent death. A death so alone.
The final cut finished as I hear my damn phone.
The sound fading in my head like a sleeping spell.
Thoughts of memories how I once fell.
Now I am gone. And everyone knows,
that it was my best friend, my "tool", because all of it shows.
the deepening cuts that run up through my veins.
the heart breaking tragidy running through my brain.
I'm gone now, thank you for all your thoughts.
and even though im gone, i will never forget what you brought. |
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suicide mission!!! somment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deranged (3-13-2005 - 05:17 PM)
| ur poem waz good i liked it |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 11:11 AM)
| wow, that was good, it reminds me of me |
by esmi (3-16-2005 - 04:43 AM)
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by TalesOfAnInfidel (3-17-2005 - 01:25 AM)
| Nice poem. Keep it real... Deff. can relate. Kinda like my poems... check em out. |
by metallz (3-17-2005 - 09:25 AM)
| I don't know what to say...:( |
by Dustbunnies710 (3-17-2005 - 02:39 PM)
| I really loved this poem, I think I might just bottle up your talent and abscond with it heh. I especially liked the line "No one to embrace. I'm wrapped around death like a twirling or lace" really awesome.
~Samantha |
by antichrist_superstar (3-17-2005 - 03:01 PM)
by (guest) (3-19-2005 - 03:38 PM)
by (guest) (3-19-2005 - 06:46 PM)
| that was an awsome poem, it touched my heart. you have great writing skills, i hope to see more poems by you.
good-day. |
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