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Think Outside The Box(please comment!)
written by ieatsmellysocks08:13 PM 3/13/05When im with you,i just cant tell the truth
And i know everything always comes out wrong
Ever since you walked over to me
Ive been just simply drifting along
Your piercings are the only things that matter
And now i never see you at school
I go to no concerts,parties or do drugs
Yet you still seem to think i am cool
Im so shaky and nervous around you
I know i shouldnt assume the worst
But no one ever wanted to be my friend
And now i guess you are the first
Well ive been trying to be honest
And i want to tell you how i feel
But everything has become so blurry
And nothing at all is real
I am laying on your carpet
Your sitting crosslegged on the mattress
You want me to be but you just cant see
And your entire house smells like piss
Doing these drugs and smoking all day
Just like in memories of my sis when i was a kid
You remind me of me but i know i cant be
Cant live with doing the things she did
And i am not your everything
I am not even human at all
Yet your always there pretending you care
There to help me up if i fall
I am no angel or devil
And im not anything in between
By your side i look so alive
But inside i just want to scream
I wish i never met you
Because your destroying me
I just want to spread my wings, forget everything
So i can finally be free. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The title is just something out of memories i have...dont try and understand it...I know the poem isnt too good...My friend does drugs and drinks at parties and i dont because my sis did and she hurt me and i feel like a loser because i dont go to concerts and parties i stay home and be alone...she laughs at me...i feel like a loser and im so afraid of her...dont know what to do...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by demented_retard (3-13-2005 - 08:23 PM)
| Really nice poem.i enjoyed reading it |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-13-2005 - 08:34 PM)
| I really liked this one nice job its well written.-CaSsY |
by babi_gurl23 (3-13-2005 - 10:16 PM)
| very nice job. it means alot to you, i can tell.. and that makes it a great poem! keep writing |
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