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all but empty...(plz read & commnt)
written by cutsoffaith08:49 PM 3/13/05As i try to focus,
it only retreas in a silent scream.
All i see is black,
and the voices are wispering.
I know i'm not crazy,
just a little over the edge.
But now i see better,
and all i see s red.
The images are still blurry.
i don't know what i've become.
I now here the sirens,again.
i guess i better run.
Runnin away to nowhere,
but alway end up home.
Not to the living,
but to where i will soon be.
This pleauge isn't killing them,
it's only killing me.
I can barely focus clarly now,
but it'sbetter than before.
I can actually see,
the blood stains on the floor.
As i look around me.
i can see my mothers face.
Even when she's dead,
she looks at me with sush discrace.
Slowly i stand up,
hurt and by myself.
I don't know how mych longer,
i can take this stress.
Now i'm figuring out,
that my mother has long been dead.
Then i have to wonder,
who's pool of blood this is.
I look down at my wrists,
andthen it all made sense.
I had blanked out,
over slicing my wrists again.
I didn't die again this time,
even though that was the plan.
Now i must go home,
and beg him for another chance.
I guess when it comes down to it,
the devil shows me sympathy.
Because he see's i can't kill myself,
for i have yet to become empty. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i just wrote this off the top of my head. plz comment.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by essence*of*midnight (3-13-2005 - 08:54 PM)
| it was truly beautiful, the feeling expressed, the emotion shining through, i admire your work. |
by demented_retard (3-13-2005 - 09:23 PM)
| Itz a reallieh amazing poem...you are really good at describing feelings! |
by persistent-cutter (3-13-2005 - 09:54 PM)
| Wow, great job at putting your feelings into words. Keep it up. |
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