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WHY? (plz comment)
written by sk8rchik09:06 PM 3/13/05Why must you judge
what you do not understand?
why do you wonder in the dark
without taking the helping hand?
Why do you call me weak
just because i take the hand
while you wonder
not trying to understand.
You will grow to see
that your actions were foolish
and you were in need,
but you pushed the hand away
and said "i dont need it,
i can make it,
on my own in the dark." |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
wrote it a few years ago and stumbled upon it in my notebook....i personally think it's pretty good for writting it in the 5th grade...comments and pointers welcomed :)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Up_Angels (3-27-2005 - 05:30 PM)
| WOW that was really good not many poems make me change my look on life but somehow that noe did WHOA good luck
*JEN*
~i bite to break my skin and taste my sweet blood~ |
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