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» Poem: Pain Never Felt So Good.
Pain Never Felt So Good.
written by Josh_x
06:39 AM 3/14/05
Running the blade along your wrists
Waiting for the blood to grace the floor
Writing on the wall
With crimson red blood
The feeling of cool metal against your skin
Letting your blood drip freely
Not bothering to grab a towel
Nothing
Just watching the dripping
With a smile playing on your lips
Call me crazy
I don't care
Call me sick
I don't care
Pain never felt so good
My numbness is gone
All i feel is the cold metal
And the sharp blade
Being dragged across my skin
Causing scars
Deeper than the ones i have within
Cutting deeper and deeper
Making me shiver
Splashing more blood onto the wall
Drawing such pretty pictures
I found love in you
My sweet little razorblade.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-14-2005 - 07:54 AM)
wow. wow. wow. ok thats all i can say. wow that was great.and so deep i almost cryed.

by DreamsxSmashedxToxShardsx (3-14-2005 - 08:33 AM)
Your Razorblade, your little lover eh? You 2 will marry and have needles fer children =] Have a Happy Life.

by mishy0077 (3-14-2005 - 09:55 AM)
whoa, great one, oe of the best ive seen u do

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