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» Poem: Empty .
Empty .
written by blackie-hawk
03:56 PM 3/14/05
I’m sitting here,
Empty inside.

Missing the love,
That once was.

Watching the rain on the window,
Slowly fall down.

Down in the sand,
As my love for you.

I’ve known it long,
But love makes blind.

It’s just hard to love,
When you don’t get back.

It’s all gone,
Summer and sun.

The cold is at the doorway,
And you’re gone.

Not inside me anymore,
And it feels empty.


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» Comments / Feedback
by darkness_follows_me (3-14-2005 - 04:55 PM)
WOW,i loved it,it brought so many pictures to my head,keep writing plz

by MissLoneliness (3-14-2005 - 08:13 PM)
I love it! And i can relate to how you feel... it's the same for me

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