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Let me die .
written by blackie-hawk05:33 PM 3/14/05You taught me not to cry,
You taught me to reject my feelings.
You let me stand behind,
Surprised,
Comfortable,
Full of emptiness,
Lonely.
Now that it has exploded,
It’s my fault,
Me who’s stupid.
Even though it were you who taught it to me.
And now,
You hide the knife,
The only access I have to tears.
You wouldn’t understand,
That the things you once taught me were wrong.
You have forgotten it,
Rejecting it,
It’s me who is the black sheep.
Why do you try to keep me alive? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by burningup_inside (3-14-2005 - 05:38 PM)
| the thought is good but it dosnt flow right |
by not_alive_nor_dead (3-17-2005 - 10:15 PM)
| the wrds are really good... just think about it.. if the words all come from your heart.. maybe poeple want you to saty alive.. maybe there is something holding you back.. trust me.... i thougth of suicide and then my councelor made me realize that ime a kid.. and life sux when your a kid... so this is all a black whole in my life maybe the same for you.. there may be just a little dtring keeping you alive..well i just reasd your poem.. maybe it is just words you wrote well i like your poetry keep up the good work! |
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