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Fuck This World
written by XsouredXfaithX10:24 PM 3/14/05fuck this world!
and the evil people in it
everyone who has caused pain
and then live their lives without regret
fuck this world!
i would love to see it engulfed in flames
burning the horror away
killing all who are to blame
fuck this world!
and all the pain it has dealt
anyone who has been hurt:
this world is to blame for what you have felt
fuck this world!
ill scream it till my voice is gone
till i find my place in the pain
until i can find where i belong |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
wrote this at like 2 in the morning
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-14-2005 - 10:32 PM)
| you seem like a really good poet and keep up the whole "emo" thing,i think you should write some more like this...if u have msn feel free to add me: amylmccabe@hotmail.com |
by neuropsychotic (3-14-2005 - 11:17 PM)
| I like it a lot. I feel like I can truly relate to that. As well as she said, adding on msn would be great...
neuropsychotic@hotmail.com...thanks. |
by neuropsychotic (3-14-2005 - 11:22 PM)
| I like it a lot. I feel like I can truly relate to that. As well as she said, adding on msn would be great...
neuropsychotic@hotmail.com...thanks. |
by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 11:25 PM)
| It's not great, don't submit it to your English Lit teacher...but I feel your meaning, and your words, and that's the beginning of what could be a great poem. |
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