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» Poem: Preps,Goths,Punks,Skaters,Sluts,& Skanks
Preps,Goths,Punks,Skaters,Sluts,& Skanks
written by XsouredXfaithX
10:31 PM 3/14/05
lieing faces are sitting around you
your praying for this day to be through
but why you wonder tomorrow will be the same
your life set in a repeating frame
could it be your hoping tomorrow wont come
that your wishing for your life to be done
these people and their lies are driving you crazy
you cant even tell who they are their appearence is so hazy
can they not go a day without starting another rumor
you know theyll learn later but you wish it were sooner
tomorrow has come, more lies are being whispered
there swirling around you, your caught in a twister
why wont they stop? they never end!
its a place of enemies. there are no true friends!
everyone hangs with whoevers in their "rank"
the preps, goths,punks,skateres,sluts, and skanks
there are so many! why cant i just be who i am?
whther it be a jock or some dude in a band
everyone is so scared abuot what others will say about them
so they put on their fake selves as sooon as the day begins
i can promise that you do it to
if you think about it no one at school knows the real you
dont worry, one day the truth will unfold
until that day ill continue to be part of the mold


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
got pissed during 5th period about all the fucking rumors i have going on about me

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» Comments / Feedback
by CowgirlRyRy12 (3-14-2005 - 10:46 PM)
good keep it up and its true

by auburninnocence (3-14-2005 - 11:16 PM)
Man you dont know how rihgt you are! I swear life is so like that I wish that people would just stop fucking caring about what they look like and what group they are classified as! This poem says it all!

by deadheart4ever (3-14-2005 - 11:28 PM)
dude, your so right!! Everyone just labels them selfs its retarded

by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 11:29 PM)
This is not bad...but raise your level; I think you if you re-thought this one, edited it a few times to make sure you are saying, exactly what you want to say, in the most concise way, this poem would be really good.

by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 05:59 AM)
i swear to god imma shoot dianesjewels in the foot. this poem kicks ass. ive got some shit being said about me, and its really annoying. i wish i could scream this poem to everyone who it applies to. youre an awesome writer.

by slice_my_wrist (3-15-2005 - 05:32 PM)
i like it its awesome but terrible that people are making up rumors i hate when people do that mine are also all around school but dont let them get to you even though it is hard to do that

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