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by your side(comments n-e 1)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP10:33 PM 3/14/05I was there through the lies
I was there through the trials
I stuck by you when you let me down
I stood still through the fake smiles
and you don't want me any more
though my loves with stood so much
through jail,and lies,and cheating ties
while that ring fell to feet
but your with her now, not with me
what ever makes you happy
I just hope that you know
your own hearts looking at you laughing
its disgusted don't you see
your own heart isn't to proud to say
that your true love is me |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cryptic_misery (3-14-2005 - 10:38 PM)
| this is good, I just suggest fixing the few spelling errors, but it's wonderful. |
by Dianesjewels (3-14-2005 - 10:40 PM)
| Good message, could use a touch of sprucing up though. |
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