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» Poem: Suddenly Lost
Suddenly Lost
written by demented_vampire
12:27 AM 3/15/05
Suddenly she walks away,
it's too much pain today,
why is everything going the wrong way?

She went to see her friends for the last time,
them not knowing.
It was too late,
no more time for her to keep going.

She held back her tears,
not wanting to say goodbye.
She knew it was her time,
her time to take her own life and die.

She made sure her frieds would miss her,
but always love her.
She knew that wasn't good enough to use as a cover.

Spending the whole day with them,
the pain not showing.
Her eyes filled with tears that won't fall,
just glowing.

She cries as she say's goodbye,
taking the gun out of a friends room.
Putting it to her head,
her friends pleading her not to go.
She say's "I love you all,
but it's my time for you to know."

They look at her confused,
she drops the gun.
She drop's to the floor,
because she doesn't want to run.

She pick's up the gun again.
and with the blink of an eye,
she shot herself for her to die.

Her friends scream and cry,
shocked but what has happend.
Not getting over the fact of what she has done,
it's all over for her now her lie's have won.

It's a month later,
I still can't get over what she has done.
All the secrets and lie's for her killing herself,
are now hid.

WE LOVE YOU AND WE MISS YOU.
EVEN THOUGH YOU MADE YOUR LIFE THROUGH,
WE REMEMBER THE GOOD TIME'S.
DON'T WORRY,
I'LL BE FINE.
WE WILL MEET AGAIN IN HELL FOR WHAT WEVE DONE.
REMEMBER:
IT WAS ALL FOR FUN.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
about my friend lisa who committed suicide infront of me and 5 other friends. i wish i didnt have to see her go...i wish she didnt even go

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» Comments / Feedback
by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 02:55 AM)
Sad.

by dyingday (3-16-2005 - 12:32 AM)
I'm really sorry about what happened to your friend.

by demented_vampire (3-16-2005 - 07:56 PM)
thanks, its always hard to loose someone you love, and that you are so close to

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