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Dear Lord
written by XpaperdollX12:42 AM 3/15/05In her room she cries….She cries….Nothing no feelings on the outside will she show,
Feelings so empty they disappear into thin air,
She isn’t focusing on that,
So she doesn’t even care,
A tear is fallen,
From the brown eyes,
As she falls and loses herself this girl begins to cry,
A shallow weak forgotten who wishes to be dead,
And as she tells these words to the lord she means every word she says,
“Dear Lord, I beg of you,
Please let me fly on free,
I don’t care about the many things,
I can fix and see,
Let me fly free today,
And stay near you,
Tell Those who love me that I’ll be okay,
That the angels have come to take me on my way,
And that I will dearly watch over them,
Every single day,
Please Dear Lord let me leave today. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I am not a religous person But it just fit so well. Anyways I wrote this for a close friend of mine
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 02:45 AM)
| It's ok, a little shaky though. |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 04:09 AM)
| no, ^^ is wrong. AGAIN. all of xpaperdollx's stuff is good. this ones a good one and not in the least bit shaky. |
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