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written by jude01:01 AM 3/15/05Time for me has run out
I can’t avoid I’m slipping down
In my mind I can’t see a way
To change my life around.
This seems to be
The only way for me
I can’t see the light
I don’t know what’s right
Darkness fading in
Not coming back again
Darkness from within
My mind was rotting then
I didn’t see the light,
I can not get it right.
Darkness coming inBarrel to my head
I might soon be dead
Cold my heart’s become
Soon this will be done.
I can’t step down
I don’t know why
No light around
The dark angels Fly |
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hummm i really dont like this one; tell me if u feel likewise
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 02:40 AM)
| S'ok, I guess; nothing great, but you got your point across. |
by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 04:06 AM)
| dude. ^^that person needs to stop bitchin about other ppls poetry. this is a good one. i love it. keep it up. |
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