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» Poem: Im sorry!!! plz comment
Im sorry!!! plz comment
written by Ucantsaveme14
02:40 AM 3/15/05
Im soo lost..
Im soo confused.
Im lost in this world of pain and sorrow.
Stressed as usual.
I have no where to run.
Im running away from all this pain..
Tears streaming down my face.
How much longer can i last?
So many ways i culd just end this all..
I want all this to end!
I want it all to just fade away..
Fade away from my heart and soul.


So many things are changing..
You are not here for me anymore..
You arms arnt around me..
I dont hear your voice telling me its alright..
What happend?
Whats going on?
Are you fadeing away from me?
Are you slowly slipping out of my life?
Do you realize the pain im going through?
Can you even see through this mask anymore?

Im soo stressed..
Im soo angry..
IM soo Lost..
Lost and confused..
Whats happening to my life?
Its falling apart peice by peice..
I cant pick these peices up either..
They are lost forever..

I need you here for me..
I need to be with you..
Things arent even the same anymore..
Things have changed..
You have changed..
Your not your sweet self anymore?
Is there somthing wrong?
Is it somthing I did?
Is it somthing I sed?
Im sorry if i did anything to make us the way we are now.
I did all this for you.
Im sorry if I tryed to hard..
Im sorry if i made things wrong..
Your the only one i care about..
Your the only one i love..


You dont know my feelings are true..
As true as could be..
I would do anything just to be with you..
But you dont try..
And Im sorry..
But i must give up..
I cant go on..
I have fought the fight..
I have lost..
I cant go on anymore..
It is up to you now..
To put the peices back to gether..
And save us...
Or atleast save yourself...
There will be nothing left of me soon.
But Peices of my broken heart


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by BELLY145 (3-15-2005 - 03:08 AM)
PRETTY BITCHEN=M KICK ASS MY LIFE

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