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My heart*
written by Trapezium02:01 PM 7/24/04I thought i shut the window to my heart,
But it was smashed,
Blown into a million pieces,
I thought it was locked away,
But the lock rusted,
I let another in my heart,
And yet again it was broken,
I welcomed her into my arms,
Without knowing it i gave her the strongest weapon,
And she wielded it,
She held it and she struck at my heart,
I gave her sanctuary and she never said thankyou,
She never gave anything back,
Except the pain,
And the realisation i've done something wrong,
All alone once more,
It can't be repaired, my heart,
It looks like a tornadoe has struck,
Maybe it has,
Maybe tornadoe is just a metaphor for love,
Or maybe,
Maybe there's no such thing,
We just believe it to open up our heart,
In a way we want to get hurt,
So we can get stronger,
So we can get colder,
But time's have changed,
Now the only option is suicide |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (7-24-2004 - 02:52 PM)
| I knew this one would be good :) Well done xx |
by Morbid Angel (7-24-2004 - 02:52 PM)
| I knew this one would be good :) Well done xx |
by bathed_in_sin (7-25-2004 - 05:37 PM)
| i'm sure she didn't mean to hurt you. i'm sure you will ahve hurt her just as much if not more. |
by bathed_in_sin (7-25-2004 - 05:37 PM)
| i'm sure she didn't mean to hurt you. i'm sure you will have hurt her just as much if not more. |
by Psycho_Penguin (7-25-2004 - 09:11 PM)
| Your heart is meant to be broken... That is going to happen... There are so many cruel people in the world... Take the pain, bury it away... let it die... and continue to live in defiance. |
by SuperBob (7-28-2004 - 03:56 AM)
| well that was another really magnificent poem...only to be expected when it comes from you...but hey...i can relate...well...kinda...about the small part where u doubt if love was real....i know that feeling only all too well....i finally manaed to get past it...but to be honest....i dont think u can ever shake that feeling of it being fake at times |
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