| » Poem: good-by with love |
good-by with love
written by raven-nova11:05 AM 3/15/05she lived a shot life.
she left her son in this crule world.
she left her last writen words in a crumpaled pile on the floor.
she left her blood splashed over the walls.
she put a face on for the world.
she had a hard life to live.
she the best of a friend i could have ever asked for.
she left us with only a few years of memories.
she left hopping for a new.
she lived & loved to the greatest she could.
she left us her corps laying on the floor, reminding us how life can give you just to much to handle.
she's gone and i'm still here; remembering her smiles, remembering her life, remembering all the good times we had.
she has left me and i'm here hoping to see her just one last time.
hoping to see her face and hear her laugh when i walk into a room.
i say good-by with love. |
All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.
[ View raven-nova's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]
This Poem has been viewed 125 times
|
|
| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 03:11 PM)
| I sense your emotion. The poem is alright. You need to correct your spelling errors though. |
by Kuragari_angel (3-17-2005 - 04:12 AM)
| wow, just wow. that is a very touching peice, sounds like something i've been through. you're a good poet. i like your work. |
|
|
|
|
