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like i belong
written by sexydemongurl33501:00 PM 3/15/05why do i feel
like i dont belong
is this emotion real
something must be wrong
how come i feel left out
cant i just go home
im so mad i wanna shout
this makes me feel alone
noone's gonna help me
so why do i care
they all just let me be
im invisible to them; it's not fair
someone, be my friend
you are cool, i'm sure
we can be best buddies until the end
you can be my secret cure |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 04:34 PM)
| It's REALLY simple. I still like it though :). Ok, what makes poems good is that you add subliminal (hard to understand) verses into your poem. It makes it more interestin to have to try to figure it out, Just don't add so much that it doesn't make since! Good Jod, and good luck! |
by WitchyTianna (3-16-2005 - 02:42 AM)
| OMG!! Love it a lot better than that vampire named sky who loved pie. |
by sexydemongurl335 (3-18-2005 - 12:22 PM)
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