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written by lifelessangel01:40 PM 3/15/05I stopped because of you,
You made me happy,
I forgot all my problems,
My life changed because of you.
I started again because of you,
You've made me sad,
All my problems are back,
Haunting me once again.
I just wonder why,
Why you did this to me,
Why you hurt me,
When you said you cared,
Why do I want you back. |
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It's amazin the effects one person can have on an individual.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 04:06 PM)
| It really is amazing angel, too bad mine killed hiself.... |
by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 04:10 PM)
| Try to draw your audience in, try to make them understand in a way that spoken language cannot do; that is the art of poetry. Use your language to say something that can be said no other way. |
by depressed_lil_angel (3-16-2005 - 01:33 AM)
| your right it is amazing how one person can affect an individual so much great poem as always keep up the good work love ya bex XxXxXxX |
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