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Loner
written by ieatsmellysocks02:40 PM 3/15/05My brother thinks its funny
How i spend all my time alone.
Got no friends to hang out with,
And no one asks for me on the phone.
I never go to dances.
Clubs just arent for me.
Everywhere i go,im bullied.
Why cant they just let me be?
Ive become a loner
After the shit that ive been through.
My parents think that i am fine,
But they dont have a clue.
I never talk to anyone.
No one listens to me anyway.
So i spend my time alone,
As my miserable life slips away.
I turn up the music louder,
To drown out my lonely thoughts.
Have nobody to talk to,
While my brother has lots.
They say im too depressing,
And they dont like the way i look.
So i avoid being near other people,
And i get caught up in a book.
I never get any email,
And no one knocks on my door.
No one even likes me.
I dont feel alive anymore.
Everytime i close my eyes,
I'm haunted by a memory.
I get no sleep,always tired
And no one wants to hang out with me.
I scar myself for my past,
And everyone thinks im gross.
So I stay away from everyone.
I never leave my lonely house.
I drift by like a shadow,
That no one seems to see.
At times i feel invisible.
Is there anyone out there like me?
Sometimes i think i am a ghost,
Of the friendlier,happier me.
Sometimes i enjoy the silence,
But most of the time i feel lonely.
No relection in the mirror,
No doorbell or phone to hear ring.
At times i feel just like im invisible,
A shadow watching everything. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its true,im a loner...Please comment...i bet everyone feels lonely in their life,i just felt lonely for like 3 years now...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-15-2005 - 03:11 PM)
| omg. finally someone who feels the way i do. i love your poem. and i hate the feeling of being lonely too. it feels awful ;[ |
by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 03:17 PM)
| Good job; good use of meter (though, it could stand a tad of improvement) and your message was well conveyed. |
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