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Da way u make me feel
written by DaFriendDatUnevaHad04:51 PM 3/15/05When im happy you are happy im happy
When im sad you make me happy
When you tell me you love me i get so happy
When im depressed or need someone to talk to ur there for me
Your my Best Friend/my ex bf
We been threw Thick and thin
You have had my back when i mostly needed you
You have had a shoulder for me to cry on when i needed it the most
You were the one who promised me everything will be ok and it was
When my day's weren't so good you made it better
That's the reason why i still love you
I dedicate this poem to you because i just want you to know that i will always love you and you will always have my love. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this poem because now im single after a long relationship and im not depressed even though i love him till death i just want to tell all the girls and guy's to have hope there's someone out there for them because there is.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 05:02 PM)
| It's prose and reads like a note to your ex; I wouldn't call it a poem, though it does show some degree of emotion. |
by sarah10087 (3-15-2005 - 05:07 PM)
| so yopur telling us to be happy because there is someone out there for us even though at the end of the day we wont get them the way we want them. . .great. . . really comforting, thanks for making my day! |
by Metal_freak (3-15-2005 - 06:52 PM)
| I know exactly what you mean. The same just happened to me and if you check out my poems I wrote about it. Its the last one I wrote. |
by Metal_freak (3-15-2005 - 06:53 PM)
| I know exactly what you mean. The same just happened to me and if you check out my poems I wrote about it. Its the last one I wrote. |
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