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Friendz
written by DaFriendDatUnevaHad05:05 PM 3/15/05Friendz r people who are there for you when you need them
Friendz r the one's to tell you if you dont look right
Friendz r there for you when your in need
Friendz r there when u need a shoulder to cry on
Friendz are the one's who try to keep you strong when ur weak
Friendz are something you need in your life.
so i dedicate this poem to mah ex man G,Christina,Chewy,Chriz,Alyssa and Crystal. |
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fa mah pplz
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 05:15 PM)
| It doesn't read like a poem; I think you could expand on this by using poetic language and structure. Content is good, but style needs improving. |
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