» Poem: i send you my farewell(comment!!!!!!!!!) |
i send you my farewell(comment!!!!!!!!!)
written by Treehugger06:21 PM 3/15/05as these visions come back and forth
i sway from side to side
wanting to hide from the monsters
but they told me to be strong
so i will stand up for myself
against those who hate me
those who attack what i stand for
and i want to escape
but i made this sacrifice
i want to leave this town
that was my big mistake
because the love of the place
has settled within me now
i cant stand the way your drowning
when your drowning at all
you seem to ignore me
when i got no place to run
you put me down and beat me
you say its all just for fun
this is what im waiting for
a chance to strike back
from my heart which is torn
looking for an outlet
i have no place to go
im homeless and cynical
i cant stop to breathe
so i scream even louder
as my ears begin to bleed
this pain and this torment
is always aimed at me
so i sing till my lung collapse
and i strum till im dead
i will sing these words of wisdom
before these words leave my head
nothing can stop me
as i go to paridise
no one will praise me
but i still dont care at all
as this final breathe im taking
i send you my farewell |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-15-2005 - 06:33 PM)
great poem i like it! btw this is nirvana_him only im not signed in cause im in a hurry. |
by Schizophrenia (3-15-2005 - 07:34 PM)
You better not be leaving, Sunshine!!
Awesome poem, dude! Very cool! Love the concept!
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