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» Poem: Fake
Fake
written by blurredvisions
08:24 PM 3/15/05
A story with no ending,
A child with no name,
Stuck in the beginning,
Lost in the game.

Confusing the truth,
Admitting the lies,
Saying what you tell me,
Stifeling the cries.

Within my acheing heart,
The truth you'll never know,
Making up these lies,
Maybe then you'll go.


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by Dianesjewels (3-15-2005 - 08:30 PM)
you lost me at the end...but it's alright.

by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 10:56 PM)
when i meet people at first, i can be very wary and put up a "wall" to protect outsiders from getting to close to me. its because i've been hurt so many times and i am sorta paranoid about it happening again. i can't exactly explain it. um but i sometimes become this completely fake person so they'll leave me alone. sometimes i just don't feel like being bothered with new people when i already have so much to deal with. but only SOMETIMES

by lilbych (3-18-2005 - 01:23 AM)
its a good poem ...

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