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Temptation
written by blurredvisions08:33 PM 3/15/05Watch this candle burn,
Watch the wax drip,
See the flames flicker,
Remember how they whip,
Remember the blood
that soaked your lips,
Remind me she told
us not to touch the tips. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Again, you might not get this one. I am such a PYRO!!! this ones a little gay sounding... hehe. but its written basically to my sister about my mom. i'll let you figure out the rest....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by doll_eyes (3-15-2005 - 10:44 PM)
| i really really really really like it, it's so simple, but i think its great lol i wish i knew what it ment, if i should idk im slow lol |
by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 10:50 PM)
| lol. um... its not that great... its like hmm... 5 lines long? haha. its just about my obsession with fire and.. mom. sometimes simplicy can be complicated... does that make any sense? |
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