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Slipping Away
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl08:34 PM 3/15/05This life is too much to bear
The only choice I have is death
By my own hand
My hand shakes
As I pick up the razor blade
Puting it to my wrist
Hoping I have the strength
To push down hard enough
As I drag the blade
Across my wrist
The blood drips down from my wrist
To the floor
I start to get light headed
My vision is gettin blurry
As I fall hit my head
Knocking me unconscious
As I slip in and out of consciousness
My body becomes numb
I feel myself slipping away... |
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just popped in my head!!!! coments im all ears!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bay (3-15-2005 - 08:37 PM)
by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 08:52 PM)
by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 09:13 PM)
| ooooh. you're getting me sad all over again. thats one hot poem. i can completely relate... sadly enough. its awesome, don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. i hope you get help. its def. not fun feeling like that. im trying to set a good example!!! ive promised myself to stop. you should do the same. it only makes things a WHOLE lot worse. |
by not_alive_nor_dead (3-17-2005 - 10:11 PM)
| ime so emotional this poem is getting to me... i like it.. it is so meaning ful... awsome |
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