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the best poem ever!
written by blurredvisions08:41 PM 3/15/05I think I'm stupid.
Yu think I'm smart.
But we BOTH know i can't live with this broken heart |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
hahahaha. just kidding guys. i just wanted to do that for kicks. im such a goofball! lmao!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by doobz (3-15-2005 - 08:44 PM)
| omg this is 'the best poem ever'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am sooooooooooo impressed!! GO YOU!!! |
by deadheart4ever (3-15-2005 - 08:51 PM)
| Ummm... uhhh.... i'm sorry .. I actually laughed... It's not that it's bad it's just ironic how it can be 3 lines long and just be so simple yet so true.. It's funny, lol!!! |
by XsouredXfaithX (3-15-2005 - 09:30 PM)
| wow that has to be the greatest poem EVER! i can not believe you wrote such a beautiful work of art..i mean how long did that take?? 3 maybe 5 minutes?? lol im just being a bitch..good job |
by doll_eyes (3-15-2005 - 10:38 PM)
| i really liked it, i don't think a poem has to be 8 years long to be good, i think its wonderful
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by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 10:46 PM)
| hehee. thanks people. i was not for serious tho. :) |
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