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Do You Still Want To Be Free?
written by TAINTEDSOULisBACK04:23 AM 3/16/05| Searching inside of myself for the strength, hoping I can hold out, no matter the length, of your bullshit stream, if you ever shut up, it'd be only in my dreams, I can't stand your stupid drivel, you drive me mad, trying to look like you know the world, acting like your big and bad, just wait till you get hurled, in an unfamiliar direction, and you get stuck at an intersection, where your charisma and looks won't get you anywhere, and the confusion is more than you can bear, and life feels like it is raining down on you, feeling like nothing you do, is right. Like no goal you have is in sight, like nothing you planned is going to be... Now that you're alone, do you still want to be free? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ehh, a rantish poem. It sucks, but it made me feel better. Comment if it makes sense to you. Oh yeah, and check out the rest of my poetry. I want some more feedback.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-16-2005 - 04:27 AM)
| UR TAKING MY FREAKIN NAME |
by TAINTEDSOULisBACK (3-16-2005 - 04:35 AM)
| I had the name taintedsoul before anyone did on this site. Then I lost the password... But that's beside the point... If your poetry is good, then why does it matter what your name is? Don't try to start a comment argument, I'll just erase them! |
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