» Poem: i want to tell you |
i want to tell you
written by vampyrekisses05:17 AM 3/16/05My dearest, thy soul burns with intense love
You crave the attention you do not need
Clueless that i am watching from above
Unforsaken, my withered heart does bleed
Darkness does come upon light of the day
Unhappy forever, I live in lies
Afraid of my demons, awake i lay
Wanting to tell you, hearing my own cries
The cries of frustration, pain, and torment
I need you so much, if only you knew
My inner beast tries hard to be dorment
Closer to you, nearer i did then drew
My lust continues in quiet and peace
These feelings i soon one day can release |
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this was actually a sonnet i had to write for school...just something i threw together...i think i can do better next time [ View vampyrekisses's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 549 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 09:22 PM)
i think that was a very good one please continue to write more. twas very entertaining. i like the part of the dormant beast. GOOD JOB. |
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