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» Poem: i want to tell you
i want to tell you
written by vampyrekisses
05:17 AM 3/16/05
My dearest, thy soul burns with intense love

You crave the attention you do not need

Clueless that i am watching from above

Unforsaken, my withered heart does bleed

Darkness does come upon light of the day

Unhappy forever, I live in lies

Afraid of my demons, awake i lay

Wanting to tell you, hearing my own cries

The cries of frustration, pain, and torment

I need you so much, if only you knew

My inner beast tries hard to be dorment

Closer to you, nearer i did then drew

My lust continues in quiet and peace

These feelings i soon one day can release


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this was actually a sonnet i had to write for school...just something i threw together...i think i can do better next time

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-18-2005 - 09:22 PM)
i think that was a very good one please continue to write more. twas very entertaining. i like the part of the dormant beast. GOOD JOB.

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