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Secrets Of A Hoax Within (COMMENT!!)
written by cryptic_misery07:07 PM 3/16/05Make-believing to believe in myself
Watching the reflection in the glass
Immitate a cheated face,
So profound and delusional..
This inverted mock of mortality
That gazes upon my person
Trying to doubt my existence...
A counterfeit reproduction of my being
Trapped on the other side
I try to softly touch
The rigid surface of their skin
But my mind betrayed me
Handling me with an illusional hoax
Such erroneous perception of
This reality, indefinitely.
I found my imposition in a dream;
Of an enigmatic connection with
The vein flow, from heart to fingertips
So perplexing, and withering slowly
Till the wire has been cut
And the subtle whisper of my prisoner
Slips gently into my grasp
Leaving me tainted, feeble, and blissful
And I perish in my concealed box of secrecy |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (3-16-2005 - 07:57 PM)
| I don't know what an effer is, but I'm not an effer. Unless in some way it means Sexy, then I am a effer... Loved the poem to. Keep it up. |
by just_nikki_21 (3-17-2005 - 07:00 AM)
| ummm...i don't think i get it, but well written |
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