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the pain
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns07:08 PM 3/16/05you were the one that I thought I knew,
and every night I would think of you.
The way we laughed and the way we cried,
the way i felt when i heard you lied.
you said "i love you" and held my hand,
but it was all a part of ur stupid plan.
to act like ur love was very true,
so that i would believe it and hold on to you.
and so i did and now i see,
that all this time u loved her and not me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sic_slipfreak (3-16-2005 - 07:44 PM)
| I know the feeling...very much so... |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (3-16-2005 - 09:01 PM)
| Thanks and its good to know iam not the only one who feels that way |
by (guest) (3-16-2005 - 09:18 PM)
| Dude! I know the feeling mate! Don't worry about it though! Fuck them! You've got much more going for you then they could ever dream of! You rock my face off and the poem completely rocked! Haven't registered on here yet, but you sound like a cool person, email if you ever get bored cause I have no life ~~~Cassandra~~~
whenusayyouloveme@hotmail.com
i also have a yahoo if you ever get around to emailing me, i'll send it to ya! you sound awesome and i know the feeling and I'm sorry that that person was such an ass to ya! but you sound like a gr8 poet and awesome person! rock on! |
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