» Poem: --The Rose-- |
--The Rose--
written by DaMaGeD09:18 PM 3/16/05The death of a rose,
And the sun still shines,
When nobody knows,
What was on her mind,
Cos none of them noticed,
And she never told,
How her heart was so warm,
But her life was ice cold,
We can assume,
That the blood never poured,
Out of her wounds,
And onto the floor,
We can assume,
That she never cried,
Behind that closed door,
In the room where she died,
We never noticed,
Because she carried on,
Smiling and laughing,
Like nothing was wrong,
We never paid attention,
To any of the clues,
Every new scar,
Every new bruise....
So, alone with a knife,
The rose sealed her fate,
And you cry for her now,
Now it's too late. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-16-2005 - 09:22 PM)
dude, that fucking rocked my face off! I loved it! I'll be waiting to read more of u're poetry! I've been meaning to register, but I haven't really gotten to it yet! lol....yeah, so it just says guest! o well, anyways that rocked! I love it! rock on!
~~~~~~Cassandra~~~~ |
by Dianesjewels (3-16-2005 - 09:33 PM)
You did a good job; your meter broke in places a bit, but it's easily fixed. Well done. |
by blurredvisions (3-16-2005 - 10:12 PM)
that was fucking hot! dammit... im green with envy! |
by mattslilvampgirl (3-16-2005 - 10:18 PM)
Your Poems Are So Fuckin Awesome |
by pyrokiller55 (3-16-2005 - 11:55 PM)
Damn that was good, thought it was great. |
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