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» Poem: [Stepdad] Your the Effing Mess!!!
[Stepdad] Your the Effing Mess!!!
written by perfect.flaws
11:23 PM 3/16/05
Do this, Do that.
Is this your little contract?

You sit around, and lounge.
Sipping on your red wine.

Complain about how i do nothing,
when all you do is drink, and sleep.
Calm is what i try to keep.
Now you've gone too deep,
bring me down in one big heap.
I effin hate you, your so fuking cheap.

Do this, do that, is this your little contract?
All you fucking do is complain about what a mess,
everyhting is.
Im a mess, she's a mess,
my rooms a mess, the house is one big fuking mess!
Fuck you! YOUR the fuking MESS.
You go out and drink, because your a little dink.
Come home and order us around,
i wish i could shove your face into the ground!
Then after making us feel like shit,
you go and fall asleep.


...not finished. . .


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
About my "stepdad" its not really good, i just put it together without any thought, right now i dont have anytime to finsish it.. hope it wasnt a waste of time,,,

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» Comments / Feedback
by highasakite23 (3-16-2005 - 11:39 PM)
kick ass poem i could feel the anger behind it, trust me the sooner you get out the better stand up for yourself and tell him these things. You have the right to do that you know.

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