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» Poem: --Why Me?--(a dream i had)
--Why Me?--(a dream i had)
written by DaMaGeD
01:53 AM 3/17/05
I sit in a park with friends,
Something just feels strange,
Some lads come over to us,
Asking if we have change.
I turn away from them all,
To open up my bag,
All i hear is one loud thud,
The coins fall from my hand.
Time slows down to a stop,
I feel blood run down my face,
And my best friend screaming,
She sounds so far away.
Touching the back of my head,
I feel a sickening warmth,
My heart pounds so fast,
It becomes a deafening roar.
The ground seems to be moving,
Much closer to me,
My vision getting cloudy,
The grass no longer green,
Everything goes quiet,
And i suddenly realise,
What has really happened,
I am losing my grip on life.
The sadness is overwhelming,
As i fade from reality,
And my final living thought,
Is "Why did they pick me?"


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is an actual dream that i had about 2 years ago, it was the scariest, most disturbing dream i've ever had, it took weeks before i could even talk about it and it still upsets me now cos it was so unbelievably real.

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» Comments / Feedback
by brokenxsmile (3-17-2005 - 01:57 AM)
I like the poem, i can just imagine how real that dream must've felt.

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