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Julie
written by systemofadownfan8801:56 AM 3/17/05This is my last resort.
my heart she did contort.
I lost my friends and my life.
If I could I'd bear it all with the edge of a knife.
god I hate this love.
I fell caged like a bird, the dove.
Just everything felt so fine and know it's time to walk that dark line.
The line of sorrow and grief.
The line of hatred and belief.
The belief that something's not right.
I should stay and fight that lovely fight.
God all of this pain.
The grief that I must ordain.
The Loss of a Friendship.
The loss of a love that will never be again |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by spaceageblues (3-17-2005 - 02:00 AM)
| Your poem is a bit structureless, but the imagery provided is lovely and the wording you use is amazing. |
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