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A Dreamworld Shattered((COMMENTS))
written by XsouredXfaithX
03:31 AM 3/17/05
off to the distance of this forgotten world
is a place where lives a town of boys and girls
everyone here works together to get things done
they sleep in the night and play in the sun
everyone here gets along, there is no crime
they all wake up and go out and have a good time
yes there is sorrow, but people are comforting
they lift you up and give you wings
but there was a boy in this town who did not belong
he hurt people purposely and did things that were wrong
this boy ridiculed the girls and loved to pick fights
to him, he was never wrong but always right
these people were tired of dealing with him
but he failed to see the horrible things he was doing to them
then there was a little girl who wanted him to stay
she had 3 little words she wanted him to hear her say
she didn't have the courage to, but she was determined to
so she took him to the side the next day and blurted out "i love you"
this caught him off guard but he thought she could be of use
so he asked her out, knowing she wouldn't refuse
he pretended to love her, and her love only grew
his love was fake but hers was true
he was all she wanted in this dreamworld she lived in
he was the one she wanted out of all those other men
little did she know her heart he would shatter
break it into millions of pieces of matter
one day, he all of a sudden left the town
out of all the smiles, there was one girl who wanted him to still be around
he had taken her heart,her soul, her everything with him
left her there all alone, with absolutely nothin'
he broke everything of hers, including the dreamworld she was in
after that day she was no longer there, she had vanished with the wind
she became part of the world we live in today
slipping into the crowd, part of our mold of clay
her dreamworld now gone forever because of that one guy
once not knowing sadness, now it is her life


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» Comments / Feedback
by XpaperdollX (3-17-2005 - 03:34 AM)
good job...I liked it

by Random_plight (3-17-2005 - 04:53 AM)
Wow. Its wonderful

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