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» Poem: away [version 1]
away [version 1]
written by lunasabrina148
05:36 AM 3/17/05
I stood tall
As I watched my world around me
Crumble and fall.
I did not shed a tear,
As all that I had once loved,
Vanished before my eyes.
I did not yell in anger,
As all that I knew
Was taken away from me.
I did not even whine,
When I was alone
With nothing but air to befriend.
I only called your name
A single time,
And you looked back to wave goodbye.


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» Comments / Feedback
by fix_up_look_sharp (3-17-2005 - 06:20 AM)
nice.

by fix_up_look_sharp (3-17-2005 - 06:20 AM)
nice.

by cryptic_misery (3-17-2005 - 06:35 AM)
lovely dear

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