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Eternal Pain (please comment)
written by xXlove+hateXx08:37 AM 3/17/05the pain you feel when you're rejected,
is kind of like the shame u feel
when you're unrespected.
He took a part of my heart
with him as a souvenouir.
Trying so hard to bear the pain,
holding in my tears.
evil spirits calling my name,
cutting me open with your shears.
putting everything aside,
along with all my pride.
Taking me apart limb by limb,
bring me back to life,
then it starts all over again.* |
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i wrote this when i got rejected
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-17-2005 - 08:46 AM)
| I love this poem. But to make it easier to read, you should write it like this:
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poop.
Its easier like that but its a great poem. |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-17-2005 - 08:46 AM)
| I mean write it like errr.....ummmlike not in a paragraph...like lines its easier. |
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-17-2005 - 10:28 AM)
| fudge i accidently clicked submit comment on the other one. please delete it. thanks. xP Anyway. I love this poem. And I know it's harsh how history keeps repeating itself after you're healed, they just keep opening your wounds again. |
by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 02:28 PM)
| its the same what i feel dont cry Nug im a girl |
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