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» Poem: Mommy's Little Girl ( please comment)
Mommy's Little Girl ( please comment)
written by xXlove+hateXx
09:19 AM 3/17/05
Screaming at her to leave me alone,
its all my fault, as usual,
eyes so bloodshot from sobbing,
coughing up blood,
you know you dont mean that,
dont say everything just to hurt me,
why do you always wanna be right?
i have enough of all this bullshit,
can we just break the fight?
i already said im sorry,
what is it that you want for me to lose
can't i just say something
without you leaving my skin with a bruise,
you think you know everything there is to know,
believe it or not, u dont kno me,
i cant even give you the chance,
you misunderstand me,
you say things to me that echo through my mind,
i forget it, then it comes bak,
now youre shouting way too much,
and youre blaming me for your asthma attack,
since we're already playing the game,
i guess its your fault that i cut,
you say that everything that happened to you
is my fault, but just fuckin shut up!
you still recall that time so long ago,
when i said id always be your little girl,
you used to actually care for me,
but now youre saying shit behind my back,
you say that i lied,
but you dont remember when you said
youd always love me too,
dont make promises you cant keep,
since now you hate me for everything i do,
finally, you go away,
i slam the door to my room,
my pillows damp from tears,
this always happens when she opens the wound*


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» Comments / Feedback
by frotofski_LaVey (3-17-2005 - 09:28 AM)
i know EXACTLY how that feels Portrayed it brilliantly Continue with the masterpieces

by XxDemonicLovexX (3-17-2005 - 09:31 AM)
Hey, this poem is really good. I looked at it and it described mostly of what I do with my mom. Its really awesome. Keep writing!

by !.:Retro:.! (3-17-2005 - 03:04 PM)
I'm so sorry. Parents can suck.

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