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» Poem: Withdrawn
Withdrawn
written by xfadingmemoriesx
09:26 AM 3/17/05
Have you ever wondered,
what it feels like to be abandoned?
With no one to take your hand,
and alone in the corner you stand.

Stripped of all feelings,
staring at your ceiling.
Crying yourself to sleep at night,
your battle of depression you have to fight.

Looking down at your feet,
while everyone is partying.
You don't have anyone to talk to,
unbearable is the boredom you gotta go through.

Watching everything from afar,
cause you're afraid of the crowds.
Afraid they'll tease and laugh at you,
for all the crazy things you do.

Your screams and shouts are silent,
at night you start to get violent.
No one ever notices the strawberry gashes on your wrists,
they probably, don't even know you exist.

That kinda feeling, is horrible,
the way they look at you is so not adorable.
You can't go anywhere without being stared at,
and your only friend, is that stray black alley cat.

So out comes this poem, out from your heart,
from this very world, you wish to depart.
But you know you must live on,
your battle, you must not withdraw from.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
>< can't think of a title yet. oh and thanks for reading it, feel free to leave a comment or two kay. x]

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» Comments / Feedback
by xXlove+hateXx (3-17-2005 - 10:16 AM)
omg, as i was reading the poem, i was thinking of a title, and the whole time i was thinking it should be called 'withdrawn', and there at the end i see that word, freaky! well, that was really good :) u should definitely cal it withdrawn tho, keep up the good work!

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