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» Poem: Disorder..
Disorder..
written by Josh_x
09:42 AM 3/17/05
Waking up alone
Wondering where i am
As i look around the room
At The sickeningly white walls
Laying on a bed
Balloons and get well cards all round
Looking at my thin scar covered wrists
Glancing up to see a drip
Mum bursts into the room
Telling me i have a disorder
She said she found me
Half dead on the bathroom floor
Holding my skinny frail body
Squeezing me so tight
Telling me i must eat
Or i shall never be well again
Kissing me on the forehead
Telling me i need rest
I roll onto my side
Pretending to be asleep
As i listen to her painful cries
Whimpering that her son will be just fine
If only it was true
I slowly fall asleep
With silent tears rolling down my cheek
Here we go again.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this about when i was hospitalized with eating disorders.. =/

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» Comments / Feedback
by xXlove+hateXx (3-17-2005 - 10:07 AM)
wow, that was good. i like poems that are kinda like stories, like this one, keep up the good work!

by ballerinalovely (3-17-2005 - 02:49 PM)
your are really good. good job;)

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