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» Poem: Shocktreatment (Updated Version)
Shocktreatment (Updated Version)
written by frotofski_LaVey
09:44 AM 3/17/05
she's lost, she's broken
she's worth more than diamonds
she's happy she's lost
the world cant see inside her
if life was a test drive, i'd change my car
but knowing the Black Widow
wont come with me so far
she's quiet, she's loud
she's pianoforte
she's open minded
she's perfect, she's great
she's my shocktreatment
my indugence to sin
"Knock Knock my Vampress
Let me come in"

i feel
i feel mistreated
i feel you
you're my shocktreatment, so indecent

WHY IS THERE NO RE-ENTRY?
I AM JUST TRAPPED OUTSIDE, I
CALL OUT YOUR NAME, BUT
ALL I HEAR IS NOTHING

i'm lost, i'm broken
patch me back together
help me bring Sun into
my stormy weather, too much cloud cover

WHY AM I SO CAUGHT UP IN
YOU? I DONT KNOW WHY I
SAVED YOU FROM YOUR DROWNING
I SHOULD HAVE LET YOU DIE


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by Genocide Reaper (3-17-2005 - 02:18 PM)
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