| » Poem: Haunting Memories. |
Haunting Memories.
written by Josh_x12:25 PM 3/17/05Looking into mirror
Staring into the eyes
Of a scared young boy
Too afraid of the truth
The truth as to why
She felt she had to die
Splashing water over my reflection
Staring at the distortion
That is me
Smashing my fist into the mirror
Watching as the blood coated shards
Fell to the floor
Staring at my clinched fist
Covered with small but deep cuts
Washing away the blood
Watching as it mixes with water
In the bathroom sink
As i sit on the floor
I listen to the soothing trickling of the tap
Wondering how long i can last
With my haunting memories of the past. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ballerinalovely (3-17-2005 - 02:44 PM)
| hey your really good. good job. ...... yeah I have had a really horrible past too.....so I can DEF. understand what your coming from ..... but i just write about like you. but yeah good job. |
by Dianesjewels (3-17-2005 - 04:52 PM)
| This is pretty good; a few minor weak places, but overall, I liked it. Good job. |
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