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» Poem: " MY PAIN OF MY BROTHER" 'PLZZ COMMENT'
" MY PAIN OF MY BROTHER" 'PLZZ COMMENT'
written by respectme4whoiam18
06:02 PM 3/17/05
EVERYTHING WAS FINE TILL LAST NIGHT
I WAS JUST BEING MYSELF
AND ONLY TALKING TO MY SISTER
AND DID HE DO
HE READ WHAT WE WERE TALKING ABOUT
AND NOW WHAT,HE BLAMS ALL THAT SHIT ON ME
HE PISSED ME OFF SO BAD,MY FACE WENT RED
AND WHEN IT TURNED RED, I STARTED TO CRY
I CRYED AND CRYED FOR ALMOST 2 HOURS STRAIGHT
IF HE ONLY KNEW WHAT MY LIFE WAS LIKE
HE WOULDNT OF DONE WHAT HE DID TO
THAT NIGHT,OPPS I MEAN MORNIG
WAS THE WORST DAY OF MY LIFE
OHH WAIT, I SHOULD OF NONE,
ITS MY BROTHER
HES SUCH AN INCONSIDERATE PRICK,
AND I NEVER WANNA FEEL LIKE THIS EVERY AGAIN,
CUZ THAT PAIN OF MY BROTHER,
MAKES ME WANNA HAVE ANOTHER BREAK DOWN,
AND JUST HIM KNOWING I CRYED OVER HIM
WILL MAKE HIM THINK HE WON,
AND HE HASNT YET...................


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
THIS PEOM IS FOR MY OLDER BROTHER, AND HOW MUCH PAIN HE PUTS ME THREW.........PLZZZ COMMENT ON THIS.....

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» Comments / Feedback
by fucking_mental (3-17-2005 - 06:06 PM)
your brother seems like an ass with a vibrater up it....i know kinda visual you dont wanna see but....seems to me like he needs one hell of a good ass woppin mabye if you bring him to wv he will get one. ;)

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