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She never knew
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns07:08 PM 3/17/05She never knew
that life could be like this.
She thought she would be happy,
Her thought was a total miss.
Her life was very joyful,
till the day she turned ten.
She started getting beat,
and beat,and beat again.
She asked him to stop,
He never ever would.
She told other people,
did all that she could.
When she was 20,
Got a husband called Drew.
He started beating her,
till she said,"i've had it with all of you!"
She jumped into the car,
the end coming near.
Went to the beach,
drown herself with fear.
She left behind a family,
that never loved them much.
her family drove her to that point,
If only they didnt touch. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Okay, I dont know if its that good because i wrote it at the last minute for a school assignment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fucking_mental (3-17-2005 - 07:12 PM)
| i liked it.....but personaly i would have killed all the people that hurt me.....i know i am violent....but thats just the way i am.... |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (3-17-2005 - 07:25 PM)
| Its cool each person has there own style and thanks
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by AngelWildcat (3-17-2005 - 07:29 PM)
| I also wouldn't have killed myself, but cause major damage to every one who hurt me. |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (3-17-2005 - 07:51 PM)
by joeslady2004 (3-17-2005 - 07:56 PM)
| I really enjoyed ur poem. I think u should get an "A" on the school assignment! It was awesome and if I were the girl I would have killed all the people that hurt me and then I would have killed myself. Ur a really good poet!! |
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