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Suicide...
written by ieatsmellysocks07:17 PM 3/17/05You told me to go kill myself,
And so i freaked out on you.
You said i can never take a joke,
But you dont know what i'll do.
I buried those words in my memory
And i went on with my day.
All that i could think about,
Is how you dont care anyway.
I tried to ignore it,
But i realized it was true.
If i went off and killed myself,
It wouldnt bother you.
I scribbled on some paper,
And did exactly what you said.
Tears rolling down my ugly face,
I shot myself in the head.
I had turned those words inside.
All day they ate away at me.
But now its gone and all is good
And finally i am free. |
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Man,i told him,he doesnt know if i'll go out and kil myself...and he said he didnt care.Please comment. [ View ieatsmellysocks's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 376 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by brokenxsmile (3-17-2005 - 07:22 PM)
nice poem... you shouldn't really care what people say... if he doesn't care if you kill yourself then he isn't worth anything. but i love this poem:) |
by ieatsmellysocks (3-17-2005 - 07:25 PM)
Thank you...i know i shouldnt care,but the only reason i havent committed suicide is because i didnt want to hurt anyone,and i now i realize it wouldnt hurt anyone. |
by black crow (3-18-2005 - 10:40 PM)
well, were here for you! your work is incredible, we dont know u personally, but were here for u!! |
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