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» Poem: You Don't Know
You Don't Know
written by brokenxsmile
07:19 PM 3/17/05
You don't know what you do to me
You're tearing my soul apart
You don't know that your foolish lies
Are once again breaking my heart
The way you lose your temper
And how you take it out on me
You don't know that it hurts me bad
Please, baby, why cant you see?
Why do you even make the promises
You've never intended to keep?
I know you don't like what I'm saying but
Excuse me, It's my turn to speak
You don't know that when you hit me
It pains me in more than one way
I know I should leave, and I'm not sure why
But I keep putting off that day
You don't know that the words you speak
Make me feel like I'm nothing at all
What do you do when the one who
Usually catches you, made you fall?


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Just a Poem.
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» Comments / Feedback
by Patti (3-17-2005 - 07:27 PM)
awesome poem... very sad... but i love it..

by lilpixiegirl628 (3-17-2005 - 07:39 PM)
totally awesome poem! i loved it!

by ForEverLonley (3-17-2005 - 07:46 PM)
REALLY good poem..keep it up! *Renae

by ~Anonymous~ (3-17-2005 - 09:29 PM)
Once again its one of the best I really liked the ending I love your poetry keep writing cuz im still reading.

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