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» Poem: thoughtless
thoughtless
written by jude
12:07 AM 3/18/05
what can i say about my mind
it is cruel,unusual and unkind
i dream of things not so nice
i have battled with insanity not once but twice
to the edge and back i have come and gone
have i made myself my very own unwilling pawn
my life is sometimes alot like a chess game
everyone including myself is under the flame
i take one step forward and three steps back
my world always falls under constant attack
i always sense the unwanted eyes upon me
i know they are there even if i am unable to see
i can hearthe laughter right through my soul
my inner being has paid the ultimate toll
i go through life with a pretend face
never have i felt right in any place
behind my mask,i hide my true identity
i am for real,i am inhumanity..


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i feel constantly judged by myself

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by boom_boom13 (3-18-2005 - 12:38 AM)
really good

by Sadistic_Looser (3-18-2005 - 01:30 AM)
it was wonderful and it sounds like the shit that i go through, you have a real way with words. email me sometime, i am a member Sadistic_Looser look me up on the member page

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