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I loved him...bastard
written by just_nikki_2112:41 AM 3/18/05He said he found me,
But I don't recall being lost.
He said I needed him,
But really he needed me.
He demanded my trust,
Never trusting me himself.
He declared himself my savior,
But in the end I saved myself. |
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ehhh...what can i say? just comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (3-18-2005 - 12:42 AM)
| you went straight to the point... a good idea on this one. i think a lot of people can relate, great job. |
by boom_boom13 (3-18-2005 - 12:43 AM)
by jude (3-18-2005 - 12:47 AM)
| uhhhhh... what can i say.. very stright foward |
by virgoqueen (3-18-2005 - 08:05 PM)
by just_nikki_21 (3-21-2005 - 06:09 AM)
by ThankgodIamanatheist (3-21-2005 - 06:27 AM)
| i like the poem and by the way ill try to spell better thanks for the advice |
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